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applec

呢三句啱唔啱 grammar , 係唔係Chinglish?

Alice and Stan are very happily married

Monica's English is very fluent

A lot went wrong during our holiday because it was badly planned

[ Last edited by applec on 2005-10-8 at 01:31 PM ]

SusanCrystal

Alice and Stan are married very happily.

Monica speaks English very fluently.

第3句錯到唔太明佢講乜=.=

applec

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JOHNLAM17

[quote]Originally posted by applec at 2005-10-8 01:06 PM:
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thirdwould

Originally posted by applec at 2005-10-8 01:06 PM:
呢三句啱唔啱 grammar , 係唔係Chinglish?

[quote]
Monica's English is very fluent

I think it should change to :
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The speech of Monica is very fluent.

[ Last edited by thirdwould on 2005-10-13 at 12:07 PM ]

zubat

Originally posted by thirdwould at 2005-10-9 07:15 PM:


I think it should change to :
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The prounication of Monica is very fluent.

We won't say sb's pronounciation is fluent.
We decribe one's pronounciation as clear or accurate.
Instead, we should say one's speech is fluent.

宇文水靈

第一句應改為: Alice and Stan get married happily.
第二句應改為: Monica speaks English fluently.
第三句應改為: A lot of things went wrong during the holiday because it was badly planned.

applec

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